tisdag 10 maj 2011
Sir Joseph Ronakali
His unconscious mind was controlling his actions. Never would he have demonstrated such a courageous persona had this not been the case. The pitiful and destructive consequences that followed led to life-threatening injuries. If it were possible for him to rein act the traumatic scenario, he would. However he wouldn’t have acted differently. His obvious cocky attitude stems from the ..
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I like the beginning of this short story. The person you have described (the main character I guess?) is very interesting, although I'd like to know what hw is thinking. What has he done? Why did he do it?
SvaraRaderaThe beginning is interesting and makes me curious about what he has done. Even though this is only the beginning it gives a picture of the charcter as someone that is not particularly nice (since he would not have acted differently in this life-threatening situation), the word choices also gives this impression. It will be interesting to see if the character is "evil" or if he will surprise me.
SvaraRaderaOkay, you'll have to get more concrete and soon. This is way too vague about everything. Specific details, please.
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